Van Gogh stares through the centuries. He could be studying every detail of the café for one of his paintings: every rose-tinted light, every bottle clink and curve. The colors of his century are abstract, inviting.
He scrutinizes a shadowed corner and finds me there. He is committing it all to memory. He just might go home and paint my stunned expression as I stare back at him.
I raise my glass in a toast, wanting him to know how much his art is finally appreciated. The bartender scowls. But then, she must think I’m toasting a blank wall.
For Friday Fictioneers, writers from all over the world come up with a 100-word story or poem inspired by a photo that’s posted every Wednesday. Thank you to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting and to Ted Strutz for this photo.
Dear Sheila,
A drunk with a vision? Or perhaps she just has a vivid imagination. In any case an enjoyable read. Made me want to sing, “Starry, starry night, paint your pallette blue and gray…”
shalom,
Rochelle
Could be – I guess I was thinking either way or even that it was some kind of a portal to another time that no one else could see. Maybe a connection with van Gogh makes this person see it. It’s fun when writing can be interpreted in different ways. That’s a great song – and now I’m singing it too!
“He just might go home and paint my stunned expression as I stare back at him.”—I love that. Great piece. Perfect for that image. 🙂
Thanks Carrie! All I could think of when I looked at this was how much that guy in the painting looks like van Gogh, and how he much he was staring. These are fun to do. It’s like letting myself play for a while. 🙂
Good take on the prompt. I was channeling a bit of Don McLean myself.
janet
Thank you! I love that song and haven’t heard it in a long time, but now I’m hearing it in my head too.
As an artist, I can appreciate the study of places and things. good 100 words.
Thank you! I do love describing things. I also love art and so that painting kind of drew me into the picture.
Nice photo and you certainly did it justice! I do wonder where the photo was taken?
Thank you! The photo was taken by Ted Strutz – I think he said it was in Seattle but it did make me think of France too for some reason. I hope you’re feeling better and enjoying the spring sunshine!
It’s the Icon Cafe in Seattle.
Loved Van Gogh’s Cafe, Sheila. There are a few misunderstood artists and writers that make you wish you could go back and tell them how loved and appreciated they would be! Great take.
It would be nice if van Gogh could somehow know how much people love his art these days. Maybe he has found a portal somewhere. 🙂
Your excellent piece goes perfectly with what is an intriguing image Sheila, nicely done.
Thanks Roy! That’s really nice of you. These are fun to do, just to see where your mind takes you after staring at a photo for a while.
Excellent write, Sheila! I love it.
groetjes, Francina
Thanks Francina! For some reason, that painting drew me in and kind of took over, but it’s fun when things like that happen.
This is so good! And I too, was doing the”Starry, starry night” bit too!
Love
Christine xx
Thanks so much! Now I have that song in my head too so we can sing it together. 🙂
The song is a particular favourite of mine; it was being played a lot over the air in the hot summer when I had just finished working and was waiting or our first born to arrive! Quite a long time ago! But being reminded of it all, it feels like yesterday 🙂 x
It’s funny how songs can bring us right back to those times so easily. It’s a great song to keep hearing and it would go perfectly with a hot summer. Did your first born turn out to be an artist? 🙂
Ha ha!! Well he’s an IT whiz kid!! Maybe that’s art?!! 🙂
Xx
I want some of whatever you’re drinking, darling! Well done.
Hahah! Me too. You never know what you might see in bars like this. Anything could happen. 🙂
Each has a vision into another place/ very nice
Thank you – I’m still not sure if the vision is real or caused by whatever they’re serving at this place.
What a great take on the prompt. It’s amazing how much can sometimes be said in so few words!
Thanks! It is tough to try to fit anything into 100 words, but it’s a fun challenge. Hope you have a great weekend!
Well done, Sheila. This lovely piece of writing completely took me there! 😀
Thanks Dianne! It’s fun to do this every once in a while just to let my mind play and see what happens.
well done… i’ll have whatever she’s having.lol 🙂
Thank you – cheers and happy weekend!
Lovely! I want to go to that cafe myself and meet a few artists…
Well, this place is in Seattle so it’s on your coast anyway. Say hello to van Gogh for me. 🙂
I don’t see Van Gogh in this, but I am glad you did. I enjoyed your story.
Thank you – for some reason, he was all I could see when I looked at the painting. But maybe I’m hallucinating. 🙂
Lovely, really enjoyed this take on the prompt.
Thanks Sandra! I hope you’re having a great time on your trip.
I really like this, Sheila – always enjoy a portal to other worlds and times!
I’m glad someone wrote about the picture as it’s certainly colourful. 😉 And don’t we all, as creators, want to know our work is appreciated? Thankfully, with the internet, we don’t have to wait until decades after we’re gone. 😉
Yes, the internet does help with that! For some reason, when I really looked at that picture, the painting was all I could see. Maybe there really was a portal there somewhere. 🙂
I couldn’t help but LOL 😆
nice imagination
Thanks Amira! I’m glad it made you LOL. I hope you have a great weekend!
Staring through the centuries. I believe in reincarnation and I did wonder once or twice if a Van Gogh, Camille Claudel or whoever had to see their existing works further down the line, what they would think of it? Might be a theme for a story? Well done, enjoyed it.
I’ve wondered that too. You’d think the art would resonate with that reincarnated person, but then maybe the memory of it wouldn’t carry over through the different lives. I’d guess they’d understand the art in a different way than others. That would be an interesting story just to see what would happen.
You made me see the Van Gogh behind the bar. I love that each story helps me to see more. Thanks!
Thank you! It is a lot of fun to see how different the stories can be, even though we’re all getting our stories from the same picture. I’m glad you saw Van Gogh too. I was starting to think he might be a figment of my imagination.
Wonderful writing and story, Sheila, really enjoyed this! Have a wonderful Friday! xxx
Thanks so much Lauren! Happy Friday and weekend! xoxo
Laughing 🙂 really great write up
I’m glad it made you laugh! You never know what might happen in these crazy bar rooms. 🙂
Absinth works wonders 🙂
Hahah! There are all kinds of strange potions twinkling behind that bar. 🙂
I always liked cluttered bars, and your piece ties Van Gogh in nicely to that image. Well done!
Thanks Kate! It does look like a fun place to hang out in, especially if there are portals to another time in there. 🙂 Happy weekend and Mother’s Day!
Nice. It’s a bit creepy to think of dead painters looking down at us, studying us. 🙂
Yes, dead painters can be a bit creepy. 🙂
Reminded me of when I went to a coffee shop in Barcelona, Spain where Hemingway used to frequent. Lots of good stuff here, Shelia. Marvelous!
Thank you so much! I hope you were able to bring Hemingway back to life there somehow.
Unlike Hemingway, I left BCN in the condition I found it.
Toasting a blank wall – I love the different points of view.
Thank you – I’m still not sure what the real story is with this one! 🙂